Thanks Kathleen Morris and Kelly Jordan of 4KM and 4KJ for sharing their tips for writing quality comments and blogging tips!
We are the learning legends from Pt Lonsdale Primary School. We are 112 grade 3-6 sudents with our teachers Mrs Hill, Mrs Barry, Mrs Murphy, Mr Ahearn and Mrs V. We will be using this space to share our learning with our community and the world! The learning legends love comments, so please feel free to leave us one!
Thanks Kathleen Morris and Kelly Jordan of 4KM and 4KJ for sharing their tips for writing quality comments and blogging tips!
Hi my name is Eva.
I am in Miss Migan’s class. She is very nice. what did you do in the holidays.
From Eva
Hi Eva,
On the holidays I went to Hamilton Island. Hamilton Island is my favourite place to go. I also went to the Great Barrier Reef. What did you do on the holidays?
From Max
Hi eva my name is vici
on the holidays ihad lots of fun what did you do?
hi Eva.
i’m in mrs murphy class
i went on a jet ski and chilled with some friends and went surfing.What did you do?
on the holidays i went to luna park,movies and the skate park bye.
On holiday i went to the movies and i also went luna park and i sore my family bye.
Hey Rex,
Good Comment
From Max
Great work, I love the way you’ve linked the Tribes Agreements with advice about posting a comment. This will be really useful for people making comments in the Ultranet.
Dear Wendy,
Thanks for leaving a comment. Because we are a TRIBES school, we thought it would be very useful to link commenting with the TRIBES agreements. The students brainstormed how the agreements fit in with blogging and this is the list we came up with.
Mrs Murphy
This is very helpful for parents, students and teachers. I wonder if there is a way that we can simplify it for the Juniors? I will definately use it on the PE@Lonny blog.
Miss Henderson.
Dear Ms Henderson,
We hope it can be helpful for you on the PE blog too. What do you think we should simplify for the junior school? Let’s have a go at it next week.
Enjoy your week!
Mrs Murphy
dear mrs murphy
my dad thinks having a sports blog is good to
hi miss henderson
its tessa my dad thinks its a good idea doing a sports blogg too. I am neavos about sports day the reason i dident coment on your blogg is because it says log in to do a coment and i dont no my pasword.
from tessa
Hi Tessa,
Having a sports blog is a GREAT idea… clever Ms Henderson. Can’t wait to see the pictures of Sports Day and keep up to date on all you are doing in PE.
It is the same process to leave a comment on PE@Lonnie as it is on our blog. So… just your name, your email (you can use pt lonsdale1@gmail.com) and then the spam word so we know you are human Tessa! Although, I am fairly certain of that!
Here is the blog address:
http://pefunatlonny.global2.vic.edu.au/
Let me know if it doesn’t work again!
Mrs Murphy
dear mrs murphy
it dosent work please can you help me
from tessa
Hi everyone,
Tessa I hope you can sort your log in out. I am still learning how to navigate the blog too. We are lucky to have Mrs Murphy who can teach us heaps.
Keep an eye out for some action photos from the CC.
Ms Henderson
hi guys im geordie in mrs murphys class i went surfing heaps at frontbeach backwash and backbeach pt lonnie, it was heaps of fun were did you have your holidays.
geordie
hey robbie isant the blog cool. you are awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwsome. and thank you Darcy sighing off.
Hi guys,
This blog is excellent! We loved reading the comments left so far. Hope there are many more to come. Well done and stay warm (it’s freezing)
From Jen (Belle’s mum)
Hi Jen,
thank you for the comment on the blog.
From Belle.
Hi Lola
I would love you to bake me a nice cake for my birthday – could it be a Dolls in the Jelly Pool Cake, just like Nanny Mags used to make. Hmmmm Yummo!
Love Uncle Cal (Harry’s Uncle Cal too)
Great little school
Hi, Yes! this is a very good school,
thank you.
just wondering who’s Grandpa are you?
charlotte
Hi everyone at 3/4 Lonnie.
What a great idea this blogging is. It’s very new to me, but it’s an excellent way to see what is going on. I hope none of you blew away in the wind today.
Be good.
From Trev (Jaz’s Dad)
Hi Trev,it’s Josie here,
Jaz, good job getting Trev on the blog.
Try to get your Mum on the blog.
Trev, do you like our ‘How To Comment’ poster?
From your friend,Josie.:)
Hi everyone, I love your blog. I’m reading it from sunny. Lots of good comments and good ideas. I hope to read some more soon.
keep up the good work.
From Karina (Max’s aunty Emu!!)
Hi Karina, i’m charlotte and i’m 8 years old and i’m hoping soon that we will get to have a change on the blog!
how old are you and what school do you go to you?
thanks for commenting on the Blog!
Charlotte
Hi everyone,
the blog looks great.
maybe we could do a big change on the blog.
i appreciate everyone commenting on the blog, to read.
sighning out charlotte
Hi Charlotte
Thank you for your message. I love your class blog. I don’t go to school but I do teach English at TAFE in Queensland. I am Max A’s aunty.
Hi Karina
i didn’t see that part.
whats it like in Queensland?
thankyou for liking our Blog.
Max is in my class.
how is your class going?
Just wondering whatis a TAFE?
thanks for the comment. charlotte
Hi guys!!!



The blog looks great!
hopfully there will be more posts and comments to read soon
i know i’me doing a post on friendship.
from charlotte
Hi guys

i just met a girl could Karina,
Karina seems pretty nice.
she lives in Queensland and works at a TAFE!!!
what ever that is???
she also told me that she was Max Anandales aunty.
sighning out charlotte.
Dear Three Four Lonnie,
Mrs Murphy is helping to teach me to be a teacher. I have never commented on a blog before so this is my first time! Maybe someone could give me some tips on how to write a blog.
Thank you, and keep up the great work!
Nick
Hi nick
Fantastic you have done one fantastic comment well done.
I can give you some tips if you want me to?
1 You always need capitle letters
2 Spelling right so people can read it
3 Always right a comment about how to right a comment you have to rigth a bout that.
4 always copy you comment before you submit you comment in case something gose wrong and then you go back and past it and there you ahve it your comment.
Miss Murphy is my teacher and she is the best teacher and she is the best at teaching people how to make a new blog.
From Jessica
3/4 lonnie legends
Dear Jessica
Thanks so much for ALL your useful tips. Maybe I will start my own blog. You are lucky to have Mrs Murphy as your teacher. She knows heaps about technology!
Nick
Hi Nick
Thanks for a lovly comment you did.
I would like for you to start on your own blog because you can learn things.
and last tip always have a ? to ceep the commenting going on and on and on.
when are you going to start your own blog?
Thanks
Jessica
Sorry I did somethings that made it bad so past and fix it up
Sorry From Jessica
Hi 3-4 Lonnie!
I hope you are all well.
Your teacher, Mrs Murphy, is also teaching me at Deakin University. I am very impressed with your blog. Be sure to keep up the good work.
Cheers,
Damien.
WOW I LOVE YOUR BLOG im so impressed!
I would just like to say a big thanks to all the 3/4 class for letting us share your teacher.
Thanks again from one of those teachers being taught by your teacher!
Thanks again
Colette
P.S keep up the great work!
hi colette,
thank you for commiting on our blog.
mrs murphy is a really good teacher!!!!
from gabby
Hi guys
we finally have had 3,000 visitors!!!
imagine if we could get 4,000 visitors by the end of the year.
Charlotte